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AzureVixen · 10-08-2009, 10:25 PM

Ive been working on it for a few days now and I would like to have some criticism.

I've only really done up to about 40 seconds so anything past that is still ehh...

But Good/Bad criticism would be nice.

Suggestions as well ;]

YouTube - New Trance

o_0rly · 10-08-2009, 10:31 PM

sounds too plain...and lame lol. nice try though.

djsnowflake410 · 10-08-2009, 10:34 PM

needs moar bass IMO

AzureVixen · 10-08-2009, 10:35 PM

haha it is a nice try >.>.

But i think its pretty cool since it's what i like x3.

and i could just turn up the bass volume so thats easy;]

CluckBuck · 10-08-2009, 10:36 PM

Needs monk chanting or random sex noises/sci fi quotes..............seriously. lol. That's the only kind of stuff I listen to in regards to techno.

I know a guy who makes this kind of stuff. See below.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defa...&content=music

My favorite is Dark and Disturbing and the Return of NOS.

In regards to yours it seems a bit too simple and could use some complexity.

AzureVixen · 10-08-2009, 10:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CluckBuck

Needs monk chanting or random sex noises/sci fi quotes..............seriously. lol. That's the only kind of stuff I listen to in regards to techno.

That's ok lol. Maybe next time? >.<

mjhasbach · 10-08-2009, 11:59 PM

I produce trance, techno, electronic, and random ass music. I use Propellerhead Reason and would highly recommend it for this genre of music. If you use this software also (or choose to use it), I may be able to give you lessons.

55-1:08 is pretty good. It should actually be the consistent beat that is carried on throughout the whole song, though.

fruity_looper · 10-09-2009, 07:20 AM

pretty good!
don't let all the negitive comments get to you.
but at the same time critisisim is good to enhance from.

needs more bass IMO (yes i agree with snowflake)

what do you use to produce music?

added you on youtube (nishypfromnz)

sampppa · 10-09-2009, 07:35 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by djsnowflake410

needs moar bass IMO

Quote:

Originally Posted by fruity_looper

needs more bass IMO (yes i agree with snowflake)

that

melody is good, but end of song is too sudded, and you need high quatly download link.

Failures · 10-09-2009, 04:15 PM

Sounds good so far. Add some more bass pl0x.

Champin4 · 10-09-2009, 04:26 PM

uhh idk what yall haters are smokin'..but it's non too shabby! more bass, as stated, is gonna make it nice..but it really is off to a good start. make it like a nice long intro to a larger song that has some tracy woman's voice in it later and it'l be excellent.

ipodtouchwayne · 10-09-2009, 04:27 PM

DEEEEP BASSSS. is needed

james922 · 10-09-2009, 04:34 PM

I like it, could use a little something but it's good.

DBH_Nick · 10-09-2009, 04:50 PM

needs more bass n more of a hardcore twist on it would be nice

besides tht its pretty good but still needs work.

10-08-2009, 10:25 PM	#1 (permalink)
AzureVixen Member Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 81 Reputation: 5 *cBay Rating:*	Feedback for Trance Song Ive been working on it for a few days now and I would like to have some criticism. I've only really done up to about 40 seconds so anything past that is still ehh... But Good/Bad criticism would be nice. Suggestions as well ;] YouTube - New Trance

10-08-2009, 10:31 PM	#2 (permalink)
o_0rly Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 1,191 Reputation: 367 *cBay Rating:*	sounds too plain...and lame lol. nice try though. __________________ ~Like a G6~

10-08-2009, 10:36 PM	#5 (permalink)
CluckBuck Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 588 Reputation: 219 *cBay Rating:*	Needs monk chanting or random sex noises/sci fi quotes..............seriously. lol. That's the only kind of stuff I listen to in regards to techno. I know a guy who makes this kind of stuff. See below. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defa...&content=music My favorite is Dark and Disturbing and the Return of NOS. In regards to yours it seems a bit too simple and could use some complexity. Last edited by CluckBuck; 10-08-2009 at 10:43 PM..

10-08-2009, 11:59 PM	#7 (permalink)
mjhasbach Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 412 Reputation: 45 *cBay Rating:*	I produce trance, techno, electronic, and random ass music. I use Propellerhead Reason and would highly recommend it for this genre of music. If you use this software also (or choose to use it), I may be able to give you lessons. 55-1:08 is pretty good. It should actually be the consistent beat that is carried on throughout the whole song, though. __________________ mjhasbach's Club Bing Botting Service mjhasbach's Xbox 360 and PSP Modding Service Please +rep me if my post or service was helpful

10-09-2009, 07:20 AM	#8 (permalink)
fruity_looper Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 2,592 Reputation: 269 *cBay Rating:*	pretty good! don't let all the negitive comments get to you. but at the same time critisisim is good to enhance from. needs more bass IMO (yes i agree with snowflake) what do you use to produce music? added you on youtube (nishypfromnz) __________________ ~ƒruity ♪ ♫ ♪looper ♥'s CN~ If you ♥ my post or me Rep+ shows it ~If life gives you lemons, Think before you throw em! http://www.nishyp.com/ Go there now! (my music and stuff)

10-08-2009, 10:35 PM	#4 (permalink)
AzureVixen Member Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 81 Reputation: 5 *cBay Rating:*	haha it is a nice try >.>. But i think its pretty cool since it's what i like x3. and i could just turn up the bass volume so thats easy;]

10-09-2009, 04:15 PM	#10 (permalink)
Failures Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 396 Reputation: 16 *cBay Rating:*	Sounds good so far. Add some more bass pl0x. __________________ Did I never pay you for the $1 signup? Post here to get paid.

10-09-2009, 04:26 PM	#11 (permalink)
Champin4 Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 343 Reputation: 40 *cBay Rating:*	uhh idk what yall haters are smokin'..but it's non too shabby! more bass, as stated, is gonna make it nice..but it really is off to a good start. make it like a nice long intro to a larger song that has some tracy woman's voice in it later and it'l be excellent.

10-09-2009, 04:27 PM	#12 (permalink)
ipodtouchwayne Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 1,774 Reputation: 262 *cBay Rating:*	DEEEEP BASSSS. is needed __________________ NigNog

10-09-2009, 04:34 PM	#13 (permalink)
james922 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 1,211 Reputation: 84 *cBay Rating:*	I like it, could use a little something but it's good.

10-09-2009, 04:50 PM	#14 (permalink)
DBH_Nick Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 1,198 Reputation: 91 *cBay Rating:*	needs more bass n more of a hardcore twist on it would be nice besides tht its pretty good but still needs work. __________________ http://www.clixsense.com/?2969069 ^^^PTC with many ads to click every day^^^ *questions hit me up wit a pm*

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